What do you think about these short paragraphs?

WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?? omg! thats sooo goood! you should be a writter. girl, finish it, i want to read the rest!!! my god, your really good. u should be a writter. i looove it. i think its kicking *** right now, girl. love it :) finish it, its sooo coool! love ittt! omg! im freaking out!!!! so good :) love the beginning!! its soo good. at first, i thought i was reading a book until i came to the end and i waz like "WTF!? wheres the rest?" lol i looove it! finish it, get it published! lol..love itt!!!